Identities

There is a lot of contrast and irony shown in the story "Identities". Some contrast could be done between the first area and the second area, and the character to both area. t he two areas are very different in several ways such as houses that look like they were taller but sunk into the ground(paragraph 6) and in the first area all the houses look clean and the same(paragraph 2). The character said he normaly goes clean shaven into the world(paragraph 1) but did not wich made him stand out in the firs area but if he did shave then he would stand out in the second area but would not have gotten shot(hidden in last sentence). t he irony of the story is that he was judging other people on how they looked while a cop was judging him on how he looked. Some factors of his death are{ him putting his wallet in his shirt pocket, the cop being a rookie and nervous, and him not shaving. This is just some of the several cases of contrast and irony in the stary "identities".

-vert long run-on sentence.

Gino, Very good. We have the basic idea of how to write a paragraph by proving two specific literary devices in the story.

Please focus on sentence stucture and puntuaion. Put a capital at the beginning of a sentence.

5/6

Ms. D'Angelo